Dirty decaffeinated words
Spit out in the bitterness of midnight
Scrape across the surface
And drip down the chin
(It disgusts)
Alone and wandering can't hurt
And the numbing pain
Of a Novocain powder on your nose
Can be beautiful
The compact mirror never lies
(But I do...)
Screaming praises downwards
Won't get anywhere
And collapsing on the floor
Moves naught but the creaky board
That won't cry for the distress
Of a porcelain toy
BREAK IT, scream, BREAK IT
Tears mean nothing, you'll find
When they don't fall
18 comments:
captain, that was a killer.
tears wali line was great!!
Koi dukh lag gaya hai kya tujhe?
sala koi happy happy poems kyun nahi likhta :P
N (shamelessly plugging his own poetry blog)
www.fubarpoems.blogpsot.com
Damn cool poem yet again! Where were u man? We missed you! Good to know that you're back.
The Lover
http://soulintoxicated.blogspot.com/
yay u'r back!!! with a bang bang! :)
how do u write such stuff yaar? never seen such poetry anywhere else.. maybe because I dont read poetry elsewhere :P
welcome back boy :)
hey you're back! that's great news, so how was your vacation? and lovely poem :D
"dirty decaffeinated words"
Nice.
Welcome back :)
Tears mean nothing, you'll find
When they don't fall
so true!!
This is the dose that I needed...Thanks!!!
cool n clever writing mate!
Keshi.
i like ur stuff!
btw ur tagged
hmmmm...the words carry so much depth & feelings in them & make everyone think...they are so true & shows what our mind goes through when we are these situations....lovely writing!
This one -"Alone and wandering can't hurt"- is awesome.
Loved the poem!
That was so haunting!
Tears should flow,or they become icy shards which stab the soul.
Take care buddy.
as usual, well done!!! :-)
I love your opening sentence...
dirty decaffeinated words... :-)
"Tears mean nothing, you'll find
When they don't fall"
Beautiful... You're inspiring me to start writing poems again!
The last line shook me!
amazing job, yet again.
welcome bk. sad, now that i am gone!
welcome back...
now will have to gear up the mind again to understand and read between those lines...
there is sure more that those "dirty decaffeinated words" that you have poured.
Well and honestly TEARS mean nothing cause for some they SIMPLY fall....as a bribe to buckle
COOL! :)
Well written, I hope your vacation was good :)
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