I think we are all beautiful on the outside - be it male or female - its only on the inside that we get ugly.
Pale grayish-pink.
Question mark.
Talks back.
Curve.
Invitingly warm.
Learns her lovers well.
Dinner Party.
Cocktail Minnie.
Flirty.
Sunrise red sling-backs.
Sunsets with a dash of childhood regret.
Deep like a tunnel, dark like her eyes.
Elvis.
Heavenly.
God.
Beautiful.
Born with wholes waiting to be filled; fulfilled, thrilled. Born with elixirs, and mixers. Soft tissue orgasm. Baby. Cunt. Waiting.
The blood is harsh, but beautiful. Murky brown youth before the red rose of womanhood. Clot. Breast. A nest of mothers, raised from breast to breast like a chain marking the thin stretch of time.
Vulva (volcano) Clitoris (concaved... candy... creation) sensation. Pleasure is it’s only gain. A rain shower curved with beauty.
27 comments:
A rain shower curved with beauty and u said it beautiful.
Hi ,
I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be wow.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog ‘Sounds Of Memory’ took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too;
BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run www.rambhai.com where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!
This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)
Cheers,
:)
Go see the vagina monologues ;)
good one
I think there is only one dood in blogsphere who can write about vagina and get appreciative comments from the ladies.
That dood is you!
Man! If that wasn't fucked up!! :D
LOLOMGWTF man!!!
Keep rocking, pussy rocker ;)
N
very very interestingly written.. i like =)
interesting indeed yet a little chauvanist...
A very poignant poem moving.
hmmm the fact that you put in so much thought into it suggests that either the experience was REALLY good, or you might be in love!
Now this was really amazing..
Very Well Written!
I enjoyed it - thanks...
YIPESSS!
I'm stumped!
God knows what it means but its something...:)
v true!!
Wow..that was really nice!
Completely agree with nothingman!
Beautiful it was:-)
Good to know that u're back too
Did u read 'Eleven Minutes' recently by any chance?
This is the girst time am coming across a blogger who's written about vagina and received comments from fellow women bloggers...well-written.
listen to moist vagina by nirvana
lol lol
So curious and confused.....Please explain...liked style of writing though....but still, confused!
I would have not read it after seeing the title, had the first line not saught my attention...and then I read on and man, what beauty!
Enjoyed it vry much.
:)
If only there was something I could possibly say without ruining the impact of it all... a simple attempt to praise would fall like rock, breaking the invisible tension on the water. Oh, the limitations of the tongue...
So I can only hope you got the message! :)
amazingly written ....
:)
what-everrrrr
u've written it beautifully... u can really get away w/ quiet a lot of things... :) loved it
Ahaan!!!
;)
:)
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