Music dripping off the moon like sin
Taking form of lips, pursed in concentration
Weaving around the frost like lost memories
And the footprints can't follow,
Because they still don't know where they're wandering to.
The imagination kills the soul
When the mind decides it wants something else too;
And when a boy loves a girl, the words get lost in
The thick facade of flattery, illiteracy, and the pregnancy
Of silence that doesn't know when to end
Saccharine eyes batting away at the decayed face
Of too many untold lies, and not enough truth
And if there was truth, it got swallowed up
By the constancy of waiting
And the suffering of thinking the world's a joke
Loners feel the sin; the moonlight too
And lovers wake under the glow (it drains)
Running, running away towards shame and something better
Than living conditions filled with uncertainty.
Save it for the weekend, sweetheart.
23 comments:
:) Loved it!
I really like this, you've captured the loneliness and sorrow really well.
I loved it..like always!
Whre have you been btw? :
you're a genius Jeevy.. what do I say.. just yesterday I was discussing with a friend about 'the suffering of thinking the world's a joke'. If the world's a joke.. why should we care for all the supposedly insignificant ppl around us.. but then, we happen to, we find it necessary, why cant we just let everything go, why give so much importance to a joke..
na?
what can I say..such word play, such music..
Supa cool work man!
Too good!
How ya doin?
each word means something...
nice post...
interesting read :)
Superb!
"Imagination kills the soul" !!! - Awesome! Too true.. I have experienced it a lot of times!!
whats going here Jeevy?
loved the first para....but then got a bit lost..
imagination kills the soul....really?
Rajeev..you are indeed a good impressionist.
I saw what you saw. Don't keep yourself 'far'; when you have a good soul.
At one point of your life, you will be bored of 'knowledge' and will miss that 'imagination' a lot. Be a little more romantic.
Take care
Manish
loved it..the imagination kills the soul
When the mind decides it wants somethings else too.... a thought beautifully woven into words
good one
Beautiful as always:-)
Loved it!
Great work!
simply loved how u ended it :)
save it for the weekend sweetheart ;)
Great imagery! :)
hats off!!!
You always do interesting with the structure and punctuation.
whoa! Awesome! :) You've got a real flair dude! :)
interesting. I love the last stanza ;-)
beautiful!
Ah am back after a long time here.. glad that I am :)
beautiful poem.. but I wanna say about the quote on your header.. very intriguing!
That is some interesting imagery...it really has me thinking.
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