very abstract...or not. you decide.
An octave of sound
And a climax never beginning
Simply calling out
For the end of purity, or the impression of
Cutting corners in the circle of light
Sensing a presence; Blinding
Learning to dance, hauntingly beautiful
To the music of your death
Attempting to grasp unattainable words
Inuendos touched upon, then discarded
Shamefully
Or was it all just a dream...
Once the curtain has droppped
Move to discover the self-portrait
Never painted, only sung about
The songs of old, they give you life
Awaken from the mere dream
And arise from a night of movement
Of dancing and rituals aroused
By a mere whisper...
a/n: if you can figure this one out...please let me know. It's got so many hidden meanings it's scary. Enjoy...
15 comments:
Hey! So you finally update!
Interesting...but please explain!
Ahhhhh so confusing! And yet all I cud think of is that you are back :P
Welcome back
An octave of sound
A climax never beginning - These are some of the best wordcraft I have seen for a longtime. It really sets the mind for the rest of the poem.
Its abstract by all means !
Great work. Long time since you wrote something !!
Hehhe Can't say tho' but understood..
Gr8 to see u back dude! How have u been?
Well, I could not say that I understoon everything but I understood more in bits n pieces!
Dancing to the music of your own death...What a verse!
erm...like rite....no way tht ill figure out wat ure tryin 2 say....i guess ill cum up with an interpretation of my own...
dude,,,,that was amazing,,,,,but honestly I didn't get 4th para...
yeah quite abstract. But really good :-)
Don worry about sense in poetry.It will find sense in many and many will find their own sense.
hidden meanings, confusing words, rythm in lines..aha somebody is growing up there ;)
Matter of time..welcome to adulthood..
cryptic it sure is
I love it because gives it chance to whoever is reading it to provide it with a meaning of their own
Well well...I know what ye mean there..thats the best piece..when it has hidden n diff meanngs!!
:)
Hey Rajeev, how are you? Long time..
Abstract. And intriguing. Do you keep a journal - I mean a personal one? (Just curious)
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