There is White, and there is Black... then there is Grey.
There are souls who exist as empty shells
Confined to the misery of living hells
There are those who are dead, but yet walk freely;
A hollow soul in a living body
Then there are those who doubt their way
Who stand not tall, but gently sway
Whose soul yet thrives on the magic of life
Who dare not succumb to the continuous strife;
There are those who exist in shades of grey
Who stumble on the path, but do not yet stray
These are the ones who still cling to hope
Who look to the dawn as a new day unfolds
White are those who smile with bliss
Black are the ones who barely exist
Grey, as I, have not yet fallen
We are neither alive nor dead, we have not yet chosen
I stand here now, awaiting a savior
The dawn has dulled, and my hope wavers
And so I say my final cry
"Let me live before I die"
21 comments:
Beautiful poem!
Along the path of life,we all are gray at one time or the other.
Finally back? Hope you will stay :)
This deep, philosophical journey into the into the psychological psychology of Jevvy's mind was quite a philosophical conundrum, a drum that has been conned.
Jevvs, that was good man :)
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bahut badhiya!
Beautifully written
*There are those who are dead, but yet walk freely;
A hollow soul in a living body*
Ass souls :)
a question - when you are talking about souls and their personal journey why then are you awaiting a saviour...?
Long live the fabulous poet! Amen...
I agree with the concept....I have always wondered about grey too...most of us are grey..our souls are neither black...nor white...
wonderful :)
Thaz a real soul searching Jeevy;) One of your best poem too.
Hey there, sorry for not keeping up to your blog as much as I wish I could. Almost all of the entries are new to me.
beautiful!
I think Im fading into Grey now...
Keshi.
Beautiful..... Simply!
Simply lovely words...you have crafted the shades of the colours with the words beautifully...the words are simple yet so meaningful....excellent lines!
Great poem, sorry I've been MIA
wonderful
it is sometimes good to be gray and not being at the extreme ends.
Very poignant! :)
u need to edit ur work...
its too hurried and looses wat can be extrmly good...
be patient with ur poetry.
Awesome lines.I loved your poetry. Shall definitely keep coming back.
Nice work again :)
This one's really good :)
i wonder how people write
and their lines perfectly rhyme
i wonder why my lines are trite
as if i were spouting chyme..
Ew
Dont ask me why i wrote that. But dude you write well. Teach. Social service. pleasE?
"There are those who are dead, but yet walk freely;
A hollow soul in a living body
Then there are those who doubt their way
Who stand not tall, but gently sway"
:)
"White are those who smile with bliss
Black are the ones who barely exist
Grey, as I, have not yet fallen
We are neither alive nor dead, we have not yet chosen..."
How true ...
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